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- Self Improvement
- Some people say, I'm stubborn as a mule; but I'm stubborn in (on?) self improvement as well.
(I mean "intent on self improvement")

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

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- Self Improvement
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- Self Improvement¶(Commentary from the author: please read my explanation under this "correction")
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- Some people say, I'm stubborn as a mule; but I'm stubborn in (on?) self improvement as well.
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- Some people say, I'm stubborn as a mule~~; but I'm stubborn in (on?)~~, even when it comes to self -improvement ~~as well~~.
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句子 2
- (I mean "intent on self improvement")
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