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  • TOEFL writing task

  • The speaking and the reading passages discuss about the reasons, the benefits and the drawbacks of outsourcing.
  • While the writer strongly supports it, the lecturer thinks that it is one of the reasons for unemployment in the US.
  • First of all, the speaker explains what outsourcing is: as many US companies have gone global, their current tendency is to decentralize operations.
  • They maintain the core operations in the US, but delocalize the non-core operations to other countries.
  • Gradually, more and more jobs have been moved outside the US, including.
  • According to the lecturer, outsourcing is a major cause of unemployment in the US: by moving a major part of the jobs abroad, companies are removing jobs from Americans at the same time.
  • Even if on the long run, outsourcing helps major companies secure their financial future, it just results in the loss of jobs in the US.
  • Finally, according to the lecturer, as outsourcing is a fact of life, the only way to make outsourcing a “win-win situation” is to encourage American companies to educate their workers whose jobs are going to be moved offshore to help them build new skill sets: when their jobs are removed, these workers would be able to get better paying positions in the same company.
  • However, the writer considers that the main reason companies decided to outsource their business is to gain visibility in foreign markets, and that the combination of low wages and skilled workers only came after.
  • He also reminds us that outsourcing resembles a period when US companies moved operations such as customer service to rural areas in order to reduce the costs of labour.
  • Besides, he firmly believes that saying that outsourcing is responsible for the loss of jobs in the US is wrong: companies maintain low cost productions in order to keep products and services affordable, securing their financial future and that of the Americans.
  • Eventually, he also says that today, most people find it normal that companies keep their headquarters in important cities such as New York but move other jobs to places where the labour costs are lower.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • While the writer strongly supports it, the lecturer thinks that it is one of the reasons for unemployment in the US.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • First of all, the speaker explains what outsourcing is: as many US companies have gone global, their current tendency is to decentralize operations.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • According to the lecturer, outsourcing is a major cause of unemployment in the US: by moving a major part of the jobs abroad, companies are removing jobs from Americans at the same time.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • Even if on the long run, outsourcing helps major companies secure their financial future, it just results in the loss of jobs in the US.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • Finally, according to the lecturer, as outsourcing is a fact of life, the only way to make outsourcing a “win-win situation” is to encourage American companies to educate their workers whose jobs are going to be moved offshore to help them build new skill sets: when their jobs are removed, these workers would be able to get better paying positions in the same company.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • However, the writer considers that the main reason companies decided to outsource their business is to gain visibility in foreign markets, and that the combination of low wages and skilled workers only came after.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • He also reminds us that outsourcing resembles a period when US companies moved operations such as customer service to rural areas in order to reduce the costs of labour.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • Besides, he firmly believes that saying that outsourcing is responsible for the loss of jobs in the US is wrong: companies maintain low cost productions in order to keep products and services affordable, securing their financial future and that of the Americans.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • Eventually, he also says that today, most people find it normal that companies keep their headquarters in important cities such as New York but move other jobs to places where the labour costs are lower.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12