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    • the changes of the market in Yuanchun

    • in the past 30 years, the market in yuanchun has changed in terms of surroundings and the products sold there. first, my dad told me that the market was used to be outdoor and small-scaled, and it was not moved into a big building until 20 years ago when the guangzhou government started to pay attention on people's diets. the government has built up a two-floor building and attracted many business activies to the yuanchun market. now, it's clean and well-organized, and more convenient than the outdoor one, especially in the rainy days. second, compared with the former market in which fruit and vegetable planted by villager were sold, and meat was not allowed to be saled freely, the market now had various food, salmon from Japan, orange from America and lamp from Australia. these two great changes not only encourage the consumption but also upgrade people's living standard.

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    • in the past 30 years, the market in yuanchun has changed in terms of surroundings and the products sold there. first, my dad told me that the market was used to be outdoor and small-scaled, and it was not moved into a big building until 20 years ago when the guangzhou government started to pay attention on people's diets. the government has built up a two-floor building and attracted many business activies to the yuanchun market. now, it's clean and well-organized, and more convenient than the outdoor one, especially in the rainy days. second, compared with the former market in which fruit and vegetable planted by villager were sold, and meat was not allowed to be saled freely, the market now had various food, salmon from Japan, orange from America and lamp from Australia. these two great changes not only encourage the consumption but also upgrade people's living standard.
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    • ¶iIn the past 30 years, the market in yYuanchun has changed, in terms of its surroundings and the products sold there. fFirst, my dad told me that the market was used to be outdoors, and small- in scaled, and i. It was not moved indoors into a big building until 20 years ago, when the gGuangzhou government started to paying attention ton people's diets. tThe government has built up a two- floor building, and has attracted many business activities to the yYuanchun mMarket. nNow, it's clean and well- organized, and more convenient than the outdoor one, especially in theduring rainy days. sSecond, compared withto the former market in which, where fruits and vegetable planteds grown by villagers were sold, and meat was not allowed to be saled freesealed properly, the market now had various food, ss. Salmon from Japan, oranges from America, and lamps from Australia. t! These two great changes not only encourage thmore consumption, but they also upgrade people's living standards.
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    • ¶iIn the past 30 years, the market in yYuanchun has changed in terms of the surroundings and the products sold there. fFirst, my dad told me that the market was used to be outdoors and small-scaled, and that it was not moved into a big building until 20 years ago, when the gGuangzhou government started to pay attention on people's diets. tThe government has built up a two-floor building and attracted many business activities to the yYuanchun market. nNow, it's clean and well-organized, and more convenient than the outdoor one, especially in theduring rainy days. sSecond, compared with the former market, in which fruits and vegetables planted by villagers were sold, and where meat was not allowed to be saleold freely, the market now hads various food, such salmon from Japan, oranges from America and lamps from Australia. tThese two great changes not only encourage the consumption but also upgrade people's living standards.
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