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    • Hi every body, today I will introduce with you about topic “tourist destination“ . accodring to me, my Earth is a heaven with the beautiful places.
  • I have been growing but I just have come a few place of my city, example “Con mountain White Kiep ”, “ Thay pagoda”, “Cao pagoda”.
  • Outside , I always wish to visiting Thuong Hai habor.
  • At there, includes dozens of historic buildings, located along the Huangpu River,-background of the film that I have seen and I always image there í a day I’m at there to enjoy them direction by my eyes.
  • Near Thuong Hai is Hong Kong and Dai Loan.
  • I want to go to the Hong kong to see house with pool and garden roses like what I see in movies “the girl Shanghai”.
  • Taiwanese also known for building high-end casinos in existence long. and I also know that there are places even more black social organizations. you know why I say this not because I was a part anthology film fans by Andy Lau.
  • if I have to condition come to there certain that I would buy 10 a Shanghai-style dress to make gift for my the mother, the sister of my cousin's house.
  • Besides I also like to visiting japanese to go sightseeing with “ Cherry blossoms”.
  • When I was a child I used the toys made in Japanese, as robots ,motorbike, bike, pedicabs, toy model trains, toy plane remote control,.., of course, I’m a boy. re talking about the country where I live-Vietnam.
  • I think Nha Trang is the most appropriate place for me and my family can enjoy the scenic conditions of the Southern Ocean.
  • I think Nha Trang is an ideal destination not only because there is a place to relax with my family after months of studying hard day.
  • But as far as I know the quality of service there is also very good. also on trade issues, I think, Vietnam is one of the most significant places in the world and I always look forward foreign tourists will come to Vietnam as well as many people in Vietnam travel destinations in the world so famous. but now I want to hear other opinions!

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    • Hi every body, today I will introduce with you about topic “tourist destination“ . accodring to me, my Earth is a heaven with the beautiful places.
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    • Hi every body, today I will introduce withto you about topic concerning “tourist destinations“ . accodrding to me, my Earth is a heaven with the beautiful places.
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    • At there, includes dozens of historic buildings, located along the Huangpu River,-background of the film that I have seen and I always image there í a day I’m at there to enjoy them direction by my eyes.
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    • Taiwanese also known for building high-end casinos in existence long. and I also know that there are places even more black social organizations. you know why I say this not because I was a part anthology film fans by Andy Lau.
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    • if I have to condition come to there certain that I would buy 10 a Shanghai-style dress to make gift for my the mother, the sister of my cousin's house.
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    • When I was a child I used the toys made in Japanese, as robots ,motorbike, bike, pedicabs, toy model trains, toy plane remote control,.., of course, I’m a boy. re talking about the country where I live-Vietnam.
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    • But as far as I know the quality of service there is also very good. also on trade issues, I think, Vietnam is one of the most significant places in the world and I always look forward foreign tourists will come to Vietnam as well as many people in Vietnam travel destinations in the world so famous. but now I want to hear other opinions!
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