Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from Japan_parts - English

Originala Versio
Versio Korektita

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- I must have a official work to get VISA.
- I work in private industry

Japan_partsMarch 2014Voĉdoni nun!
- Raporti kiel spamo?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- ...
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- I must have a official work to get VISA.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- I must have an official ~~work~~job to get a VISA.
  ZEWilloughby Comments 1
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- I work in private industry
  Voĉdoni nun!
- I work in a private industry.
  ZEWilloughby Comments 1
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2