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  • Cover Letter

    • I am writing concerning a(........)with your oginization.
    • I have a particular interest in working for your company and would appreciate being considered as a candidate for employement.
    • I am 28 years old, and I am graduated in French language, Literature and Communications.
    • I have just complited six years experience as a teacher of French language and Communications, at both the elementary and high school levels, as well as in activities outside of the traditional classroom.
    • During my teaching experience I developped a passion of working with my students and my colleague, I have learn also how to break down complicated concepts to simpe examples that my group students could grasp.
    • My technical communication skills, coupled with my enthusiasm to assist others and learn from my experience, make me well-suited for the position opportunity at your company.
    • Enclosed resume.
    • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet you to discuss how my skills and experience can meet the needs of your company.
  • Thank you for your consideration.
    • Sincerly, Bissane BELALIA

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    • I have a particular interest in working for your company and would appreciate being considered as a candidate for employement.
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    • I have a particular interest in working for your company and would appreciate being considered as a candidate for employement.
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    • I have just complited six years experience as a teacher of French language and Communications, at both the elementary and high school levels, as well as in activities outside of the traditional classroom.
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    • I have just compliated six years experience as a teacher of French language and Communications, at bothnot only at the elementary and high school levels, as well asbut also in activities outside of the traditional classroom.
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    • I have just complited six years of experience as a teacher ofteaching French lLanguage and Communications, at both thenot only at elementary and high school levels, as well as in activitiebut also in settings outside of the traditional classroom.
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    • During my teaching experience I developped a passion of working with my students and my colleague, I have learn also how to break down complicated concepts to simpe examples that my group students could grasp.
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    • During my teaching experience I have developped a passion ofor working with my students and my colleague, I have learn also how to break down complicated concepts to simpe examplealso learnt how to simplify complicated situations that my group students could grasp.create.
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    • During my teaching experience I developped a passion ofor working with my students and my colleagues, I have learn alsoalso learned how to break down complicated concepts into simple examples that my group of students could grasp more easily.
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    • My technical communication skills, coupled with my enthusiasm to assist others and learn from my experience, make me well-suited for the position opportunity at your company.
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    • My technical communication skills, coupled withaccompanied by my enthusiasm tohat assist others and learns me to teach the others from my experiences, makes me well-suited for the positionthe most suitable person to take the opportunity atin your company.
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    • My technical communication skills, coupled with my enthusiasm to assist others and learn from my experience, make me well-suited for the position opportunity at your company.
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    • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet you to discuss how my skills and experience can meet the needs of your company.
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    • I would appreciate it if I had the opportunity to meet you topersonally for discuss howing my skills and experience can meets that can provide the needs of your company.
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    • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how my skills and experience can meet the needs of your company.
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