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Among my friend, Lan – who best friend We have known each other since we were 10 years old.

However, we became best friends when we were at grade 7.

At that time I was very bad at English, and she was who helped me with improve my English.

I will describe howshe looks, she is very pretty.

She doesn’t like to dress up so I usually see her wearing jeans and the T-shirt.

She has a very nice personality and wonderful sense of humour,but she can also get a little depressed from time to time.

That I like about Lan is she has same hobbies with me.

We both enjoy singing karaoke, reading comic books and going shopping, fishing.

We like going to the cinema but sometimes I can’t agree on which movie to see. in addition , since I am better in Maths and chemistry, she is better in English, we can always help each other if we get confused about a difficult homework assignment.

We are so lucky that we get long so well.

Besides, I also christ Hong.

She is a good student of my class university, she lived with her parents at Hai Duong city-the same where I was born.

She has long black hair, oval face and eyes can speak.

Of particular ote to me that when she is smiling.

She looks so cute when he smiles.

She’s a odel friend that I can share everything.

She always believed and helped me in every situation.

She is friendly, gentle and endearing all her friends.

Although time has passed no matter how long, I and Hong will try to keep this friendship and it can last long