Corrections

Rédigé par huamanhtuananh - English

  • Help Me

  • I usually shop in street markets because it is near my house. and do you know why my collection is supermarket that isn’t an other place?
  • Cause the good at supermarket are sold right cost.
  • The good’s date of use are ensured.
  • I have not to shop around for the suitable prices.
  • I mainly visit department stores and clothing stores to check out the latest fashions.
    • Furthermore, when I was a child, I realised a different between a market and a supermarket.
    • Since that, I had been thoughting about it.
  • And now,I believe that shopping at the supermarket is the affair enjoy among my hobbies.
    • I prefer shopping with my parent or my friends to by myself.
  • I think that the shopping is nescetsary to everybody.
  • They are a housewife, emplyees, students, children,teen ,etc….
    • and I, I like to shop for search and buy the modern machine,hold the price of many good that I consider as air-condition machine,fridge,microwave oven,interion,automatic rolling door and sometime it can only is an entertainment after the stress lessons at school,and it also is able to when that I take my family go on it on holiday.
  • Accodring to me, it is worth complaining to the top people because if you don’t ask, you don’t get.
  • I’m not a compulsive shopper, so I never buy things I see first time I remember I have bought the rice by my credit card recently.
  • And that is my awful day.
  • Cause it is on Monday of December, I had to decide to some problem at school outtime of learn.
  • So I went home late.
  • I hurried up cooking for lunch, imfortunately, when I was tooking the rice in box, suddenly, I realised it hadn’t existed.
  • I had run fast to rice store and bought it, despite of I had bought the rice but when I was cooking in the kitchen, gas in the buttle also hadn’t existed.
  • I’m stupid when tried to start it a lot of times, so I was injured.

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