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  • help me check my eassay talk about my hobbies

    • Hobbies are things we like to do in our spare time that make us happy and help us relax and forget about every troubles day.
    • People have different hobbies .
    • I also have hobbies and my favorite ones are surfing the internet,watching tv and going out with my friends.
    • Surfing the internet is what I mostly do whenever I have free time.
    • I often visit english newspaper websites such as zing.vn,tuoitre.vn,kenh14.vn,to read hot daily news.
    • I also often visit music websites to update new songs on my favorite songs collection.
  • Besides, I can know a great deal of things about lif and have more learning document by searching on Google.
  • It’s a very useful tool from the Internet,we can know anything with just one mouse click.
  • Besides entertainment, searching information, I like learning English on tienganh123.com and luyenthToeic.com website.
  • I have learned more new grammars and vocabularies from these websites.
  • Thanks to it, my English has improved a great deal.
    • I think self-study is the best way to improve our English and I find it effective to learn English on the internet or online.
  • It can satisfy all of your needs for Englisf skils such as listening, speaking,reading,writing,so I like this learning method very much.
    • Watching tv is my second favorite hobby.
  • It also helps me to know more things about life but my main purpose when watching tv is to relax, so I often watch the channels as Yeah1, Yan tv to listen to music and Disney to watch funny cartoons, HBO and SCTV9 to watch films.
  • It is an effective way to help me relax after a stressful class.
  • Going out with friends is my third favorite hobby.
    • I often going out with my friends for eating and chatting.
  • I love chatting with my closed friends, I can share any things with them.
  • It’s always filled with laughter in our chatting.
  • I feel very happy when I am with my friends.
  • Outside,my hobbies are collecting stamps,keeping pets.
  • I had two pet digs and a parrot.
  • Presently my hobby is gardening.
  • I plant flower and vegetables in my house ‘garden and compound water and compound water them every day.
  • Above are my major hobbies.
  • Each hobby brings different benefits to me, it help me balance my life.
  • However, I also know that I need to balance between entertainment and learning.
  • My motto is” play hard,study hard” and I always put learning at first . so that entertainment can bring real effect for me.

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