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    • Everybody loles holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun.
    • We get enough time to travel,play our favourite sports and practice our hobbies.
    • My favourite holiday is last summer holiday,below I will tell you about my last summer holiday,i always dream about come to Ha Long city,on 4th of Junly,my family departed Hai Duong city towards our first destination-Ha Long city,as soon as we reached there after along journey,I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures,I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes,we stayed in the 5-star hotel in front of the beach,next day,we hired a car and saw historical place,visited museum and shopping ,it was a beautiful and excited,what the holiday was a perfect !
    • We did so many activities which included swimming,boat trip,surfing,etc…, we also watched the sun rises,it was very romantic,it was the most amazing and spectacular experience of my life that I was stunned by God’s creation of a heaven-like place on earth,our journey ended on 6 th September,on our way back we travelled by bus again,during the trip I thought “ those days were amazing andcomforgetable,I wished if I had more days to spend over there,my holiday was exciting and fall of joy,I am looking forward to going there again soon.
    • Besides, I went to Nha Trang beach with my friend after the exam of university,I remember it is on about 9th junly,we went to Nha Trang by train,oh my God,what a awful trip!
    • I took off the train at a lot of hours,but I happy with days at Nha Trang,next day,I got up at six o’clock,we went to restaurant for breakfast and drinking coffee in order to not tired when play,next we went to the island,in distance,I took the sea,the water of the sea is fresh,cool,in the bottom of the sea,we could see the coral,it’s beautiful,next,we went to other islands and come back the harbour before come back the hotel,in the hotel,I had rested thirty minutes before ate the dinner.in the evening ,we took the motorbike rod along the beach in order to went for a sightseeing Nha Trang city,I happy after the trip,the trip will help me study well

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    • My favourite holiday is last summer holiday,below I will tell you about my last summer holiday,i always dream about come to Ha Long city,on 4th of Junly,my family departed Hai Duong city towards our first destination-Ha Long city,as soon as we reached there after along journey,I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures,I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes,we stayed in the 5-star hotel in front of the beach,next day,we hired a car and saw historical place,visited museum and shopping ,it was a beautiful and excited,what the holiday was a perfect !
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    • My favourite holiday is the last summer holiday,b. Below I will tell you about my last summer holiday,i. I have always dreamed about come tovisiting Ha Long city,on. On the 4th of Junly, my family departed Hai Duong city towards our first destination- - Ha Long city,a. As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures,. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes,w. We stayed in the 5-star hotel in front of the beach, for the night. On the next day, we hired a car and saw historical place,s, visited a museum and went shopping ,i. It was a beautiful and excited,what the holiday was a perfect ing. What a perfect holiday it was!
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    • We did so many activities which included swimming,boat trip,surfing,etc…, we also watched the sun rises,it was very romantic,it was the most amazing and spectacular experience of my life that I was stunned by God’s creation of a heaven-like place on earth,our journey ended on 6 th September,on our way back we travelled by bus again,during the trip I thought “ those days were amazing andcomforgetable,I wished if I had more days to spend over there,my holiday was exciting and fall of joy,I am looking forward to going there again soon.
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    • We did so many activities which included swimming, going on a boat trip, surfing, etc…, w. We also watched the sun rises,iing. It was very romantic,i. It was the most amazing and spectacular experience of my life, that I was stunned by God’s creation of a heaven-like place on earth,o. Our journey ended on the 6 th of September,o. On our way back we travelled by bus again,d. During the trip I thought “ , "those days were amazing andcom unforgettable,". I wished if I had more days to spend over there,m. My holiday was exciting and faull of joy,. I am looking forward to govisiting there again soon.
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    • Besides, I went to Nha Trang beach with my friend after the exam of university,I remember it is on about 9th junly,we went to Nha Trang by train,oh my God,what a awful trip!
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    • Besides, I went to Nha Trang beach with my friend after the exam of university,'s exam. I remember it is on about 9th junly,wthe 9th of July. We went to Nha Trang by train,o. Oh my God, what an awful trip!
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    • I took off the train at a lot of hours,but I happy with days at Nha Trang,next day,I got up at six o’clock,we went to restaurant for breakfast and drinking coffee in order to not tired when play,next we went to the island,in distance,I took the sea,the water of the sea is fresh,cool,in the bottom of the sea,we could see the coral,it’s beautiful,next,we went to other islands and come back the harbour before come back the hotel,in the hotel,I had rested thirty minutes before ate the dinner.in the evening ,we took the motorbike rod along the beach in order to went for a sightseeing Nha Trang city,I happy after the trip,the trip will help me study well
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    • I tookgot off the train atfter a lot of hours, on board, but I am happy with the days at Nha Trang,. On the next day, I gotwoke up at six o’clock,w. We went to a restaurant for breakfast and drianking coffee in order to not tired when play,nwe go out for the day. Next, we went to the island,in. In the distance, I saw and went took the sea,t. The water of the sea is fresh, and cool,i. In the bottom of the sea, we could see the coral,i. It’s beautiful,n. Next, we went to other islands, and coame back to the harbour before come backreturning to the hotel,i. In the hotel, I had rested thirty minutes before ate theeating dinner. During the evening ,we took the motorbike rod along the beach in order to went for ago sightseeing Nha Trang city,I happy. I was satisfied after the trip,t. The trip will help me study well.
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