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    • Story written by me.Please help me to correct mistakes)Part 3

    • - Jack - he heard the anxious voice of his colleague ,- it seems we have a problem ...
  • The plane ... no! No! ...
    • Above was explosion - huge iron bird crashed into the side of the building where it was just an office.
    • A huge column of smoke and fire oozed up from the " wounds" skyscraper.
    • In the telephone handset could be heard only treacherously short beeps .
    • In an instant, everything had changed .
    • Jack, as a quadriplegic , stood in the middle of the street, where the habitual vanity was replaced by panic and fear .
  • He did not know what to do.
  • It all happened so suddenly.
    • He clutched the phone at a loss , and only now he realized that just a moment ago in the chaos of smoke and fire were the people with whom he saw every day , talked , worked side by side, which , in turn , had feelings, dreams , desires, hopes ... and they were destroyed forever.
    • And most importantly, only a moment ago that there was a glimmer of hope that lit up his life - Anna ...
    • Jack , refusing to believe in this fact, but anticipating the inevitable , for the first time began to cry.
    • He knelt down , shuddering sobs.
  • Now he had to be there with them.
  • But he's alive , he's just that damn late for an important meeting ... to death ...
  • But is fate so cruel as to pick someone who he was really expensive ?
  • He felt his back on someone's warm hand , it was a girl .
  • She murmured something quick and sobbed , but Jack has been unable to make out anything .
  • The time was 8.46 .
  • He saw an unread message on his mobile .
  • It was from Anna .
  • There was : "Dear , I waited for the lift to come and met my former classmate .
  • We have not seen for long time .
  • I'll be in 15 minutes . Do not worry. Kiss . Your Anna .
  • " Departure time - 11/09/2001 8.45am .
  • His despair was not the limit ...
  • ********************************************************** After this terrible tragedy , Jack took a long rehabilitation from his psychologist , and if not the baby Angela (it was the name of the little girl) who lost both parents in that terrible tragedy , he would have just decided to end his life by suicide.
  • Now he lives far away from New York and educates, as he claims , his guardian angel , who saved his life and gave a small glimmer of hope .
  • He heads the Foundation for the protection and assistance to children who have been orphaned and involved in charity work around the world ...
  • But after the funeral of Anna Jack never married ...
  • (The End) P.S.
  • Thank you for the help in advance:)

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