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    • Story written by me.Please help me to correct mistakes)Part 2

    • On the one hand , Jack envied even to himself that he is not sitting in a stuffy auditorium now and do not listen to a beautiful fairy of the rich uncles .
    • - By the way , Anna is here, too .
  • She is in the hallway , waiting for you.
    • Jack seemed to shock struck .
    • He said he would call back and hung up.
    • As so, it flew out of his head completely , yesterday they had agreed to meet with Anna after his presentation !
    • He had long wanted to propose of the marriage to her , but somehow always put off this moment - the worries of everyday life always distracted from it.
    • And last night, hugging her in a comfortable chair in front of a fireplace, he decided strong that he will make it today.
    • Meanwhile, Jack and his little companion approached the building of the police.
    • While venture formalities and they were told to wait five minutes to fit them detective , Jack decided to call his loved girl and find out why she came so early , because they agreed to meet after the end of his presentation.
    • - My doctor did not come today to work , so I was released early ...
    • And why you 're not in the office?
    • - Whether contingencies .
    • - Something serious?
    • - Do not know yet .
    • Get down , I have something for you ...
    • It's a surprise.
    • I 'm waiting for you .
    • He went outside to smoke .
    • The girl waited for him at the police station .
    • She looked at Jack through the window, leaning against a snub nose to the glass.
    • Jack smiled and winked at her , the girl smiled .
    • At this moment, for some reason he felt some special way easily , as if he is not now late for the most important meeting of his life.
  • But it could greatly improve his career ...
  • Or maybe it does not matter ?
    • Perhaps the whole of reality , it is only convention and we ourselves define for themselves the importance of events of our lives.
    • Maybe, indeed, need to follow at least once in your heart?
  • Just pick up and start all over again .
    • As with a clean sheet.
    • Quit this damn job , from which he felt addicted.
    • Start his own business .
    • He's long wanted to organize his own fund to help orphans and engage in charity. Why not ?
    • Phone rang again , the display shows the number of Alan .
    • - Jack, this is not serious!
    • Where the hell are you ?
    • - Decided to smoke ...
    • - Well, no, you're kidding me right!
    • Max will fire you from work!
    • - So the way it should be - Jack released tangle of smoke and smiled contentedly .
  • Now the thought of a new life in his imagination manifested in more vivid colors.
    • Just now he must wait for Anna.
    • He looked up into the clear blue sky .
    • Spiers of skyscrapers as thin needles seemed to be trying to stab its.
    • But it is high and bottomless that they do not get to it .
    • Somewhere in the distance appeared a dark spot , as if someone purposely put this brush on a blank canvas .
    • But it is rapidly increased in size and flew like a giant bird , leaving a white "tail" .

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