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Rédigé par LaPlusHeureuse - English

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    • Today he got out of bed on the wrong side: for some reason alarm have rang not in the time, iron have burned a new shirt, kettle have burned down, so he had to go to work half-starved, only hastily bite the last piece of pizza that was in the fridge.
  • The bus broke down on the way, he had to take a taxi.
    • 7.55 am on the clock.
    • Jack threw the taxi driver 20 dollars and, without waiting for short change, shot out of the car.
    • He briskly walked along a busy street, through the crowd, that something anxious and hurrying somewhere.
    • Approached a pedestrian crossing - at the traffic lights burned red.
    • Every second was expensive.
    • Nervously waiting for the green light, he stood on the sidewalk with all and was waiting the signal "Go".
    • All his life he was waiting for someone's signal: when it's Friday, when the boss give "ok" to start a new project, when the long-awaited holiday to spend it with his beloved girl ...
  • He remembered Anna's eyes.
    • Eyes color of blue lagoon.
    • So sad, but kind.
    • Yesterday she did not want to let him go, begged him not to go on a business trip in this cold and gloomy London.
    • "Let's go somewhere, no matter where, if only together."-Spun her words in his head and a lump come in his throat.
    • He stood there, lost in thought, when he heard of the incessant buzz of the crowd and the cars passing a tiny voice.
    • Someone ruffled from below hem his jacket. there was girl about five year's old."Uncle ...
    • Uncle, help me find my mom" - she looked at him with eyes swollen with tears and sobbing.
    • At the traffic light turned green.
    • Facial Jack drove cheekbones, he looked at his watch - 7.58.
    • A few seconds thought, he took the girl's hand and together they marched across the street to the side of a huge building height of 110 floors.
  • They went into the lounge.
    • Going up to the reception desk, Jack gave his name: - Wait a minute, Mr. Stevenson - woman was typing something on a keyboard and making sure that everything is in order, she continued, - they are already waiting for you.
    • - Can I ask you a favor?
    • - He nodded toward the girl - child lost and looking for her mother.
    • Could you ask someone from the guard to help?
    • Today, I have a very important meeting at the center, I can not miss it.
  • The girl reluctantly agreed.
    • Jack literally flew into the lift, doors closed - he saw on a chair near the rack fidgeted his new little friend, she looked at him like a little kitten that was left on the outrage.
    • - What floor , mister?
    • - girl asked him, standing on the left - Ninety-ninth.
    • The lift began to rise.
  • Floors were counted as seconds.
    • Jack, continually, glancing at his watch.
    • Ninety-four, ninety-fifth ...
    • He thought to himself pronounces his text, a learned by heart, a speech that he will now speak at a presentation on assistance to orphans.
    • At the ninety-sixth floor of the lift stopped, three men came out.
    • Only started to close the door, but at this moment something possessed Jack get off the lift at the last second.
    • The girl, who was standing next to him, surprised shouted after him: "Where do you go,Mister?
    • Ninety-ninth floor is three floors up!" - I changed my mind,- smiling, he headed for the stairs.
    • Some unknown force pushed him, he raced down the floors, as if afraid to miss something more important than this meeting, which was a lot in his life, and probably still will be enough.
    • Here is probably his boss, blushing and apologizing for the delay of his subordinate, proposed partners to begin without him.
    • Well, then he will get a first - Jack did something contrary to his boss and it's even a little fun.
    • And that his colleague , Alan , nice guy, he's probably going through now , because the second word must utter it .
    • And here he is calling.
  • Jack picked up the phone .
    • - Where the hell are you ?
    • - Whisper hissed Alan , we'are waiting here for half an hour !
    • - Start without me , I'll be barely - Jack said , flying in the ground floor hall.
    • - What do you mean ?
    • Max will kill you !
    • What happened to your voice?
    • - I run , I tell you, start without me ...- Jack , all red from running, flew to the child , whom he had left fifteen minutes ago here (strangely , no one apparently was not going to help her ) , girl joyfully jumped up and hugged him for hand.
    • - I was just going to call someone - started making excuses girl - administrator, but Jack interrupted her : " Do not worry , I'll take care of her " , as she clearly was not against this , she had a lot of things to do today .
    • - Who are you talking about? Where are you?
    • - Alan was still on the wire.
    • - Now I'm on the street outside the Centre, go to the police. - The police?
    • Jack , what happened?
    • You understand that this presentation is very important for us , and now you can spoil everything ,- Allan tried to speak very quietly in the background could be heard as their chief pains before an audience , telling how important their work and the contribution they make to the global society .
    • Better if he did so , as said , would be more benefit...(To be continued)

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