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  • Mini Essay: Premium Prices for Tourists.

    • It is thought that tourists should pay more than people, who lived in a country, for visiting historical or popular locations.
    • However, another people think that everyone should pay the same amount of money.
  • I am going to discuss both points of view and give arguments for supporting premium prices for foreign visitors.
    • First of all, the most important advantage of high prices for sightseers is a good income for the government.
  • For instance, some tourists, who visit a foreign country, have money which they have already decided to spend on leisure activities.
    • Therefore, they are not noticed the difference in costs.
    • Mover At the same time the government gets extra taxes.
  • That money can be used for supporting cultural objects and the poor.
    • In addition, that money can be also spent on finding new ancient items and locations.
    • On the other hand, some people consider that premium prices are unfair.
    • Sometimes, tourists do not have extra money for visiting cultural and historical places.
    • To illustrate, it could be a person who has a religious motive to visit spiritual objects, but do not have enough money.
  • Therefore, he or she could not afford to pay the premium.
    • As a result, the rights among members of a society would not be equal which could create tensions in a society.
  • In conclusion, there are such numerous popular places in the world which attract people to visit them.
    • However, I agree with the opinion that tourists should pay extra money, because it helps to support historical locations and the poor.

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