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- hello every body
- hello dear i'm french man of 25 years old i want make me friend born the country wich english and mother tongue thank you kis

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- hello dear i'm french man of 25 years old i want make me friend born the country wich english and mother tongue thank you kis
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- hHello ~~dear ¶i'm french man of~~,¶I'm a 25 years old iFrench man. I want to make mea friend ~~born the country wich english and mother tongue t~~who was born in an English Speaking country. Thank you ~~kis~~!
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- ~~hello dear~~ HI guys!¶i'm a french man of, I'M 25 years old, i want ~~make me friend born the country wich english and mother tongue~~TO MEET friends from natives english countries. thank you ~~kis~~.
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