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- Dear Madam, I have been informed by Hugo, student of ESSEC, that your company has provided the opportunity to students to apply to their job position during the summer period.
As part of my second year course of studies at ESSEC, I 'm looking for a job position in your company for three months Thank you in advance ;-)

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- Dear Madam, I have been informed by Hugo, student of ESSEC, that your company has provided the opportunity to students to apply to their job position during the summer period.
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- ¶ ¶Dear Madam, I have been informed by Hugo, student of ESSEC, that your company has provided the opportunity to students to apply ~~to their job position~~for a job during the summer period.
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- As part of my second year course of studies at ESSEC, I 'm looking for a job position in your company for three months Thank you in advance ;-)
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