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  • "School Days With A Pig"

    • "School Days With A Pig" is a Japan movie, describe a primary school teacher and his students feed up a pig, and after it grow up, they will eat it.
    • This movie public on 2008, rewrite from a true story.
    • A new teacher bring a little pig whose name is "Little P", and told his 26 students take care this pig on round, and after it grow up, this pig will be eaten by them.
    • After one and half year passed, the pig had already grow up.
    • Those students has a hard choices to kill it or not.
    • Not long time ago, another primary school do the same thing, they feed up two pigs, "Sky fly" and "Sun", after 150 days feed up. when the day is coming, many students saw the pigs caught away by someone and be killed, they cry a lot and almost can not control themself.
    • After that the administer of school bring the meat to those students and told them "see! this meat is come from sun".

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    • "School Days With A Pig" is a Japan movie, describe a primary school teacher and his students feed up a pig, and after it grow up, they will eat it.
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    • "School Days With A Pig" is a Japanese movie, describe about a primary school teacher and his students and how they feed up a pig, and after it grows up, they will eat it.
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    • A new teacher bring a little pig whose name is "Little P", and told his 26 students take care this pig on round, and after it grow up, this pig will be eaten by them.
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    • A new teacher bringought a little pig to his class whose name is "Little P", and told his 26 students to take care this pig oin round, and after it grow upturns. After the pig was fully grown, this pig willould be eaten by them.
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    • Not long time ago, another primary school do the same thing, they feed up two pigs, "Sky fly" and "Sun", after 150 days feed up. when the day is coming, many students saw the pigs caught away by someone and be killed, they cry a lot and almost can not control themself.
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    • Not long time ago, another primary school doid the same thing, they feed up two pigs, "Sky fly" and "Sun", and after 150 days feed up. wit was fully grown. When the day is comingame, many students saw the pigs caught away by someone and bend killed, t. They cryied a lot and almost canould not control themselfves.
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