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    • about two days a go i have met one peson in the city center , i dont remember realy when i have met him before, but when he began to talk with me i have shocked becuase he called me by wrrong name , but i make as everything is right, i like to know who this person and why he look at me while i am walking in the street , and why he came to the same coffee shop where i have take coffe , and he look like i have seen him before, after he got his coffee he began to talk with me without looking at me when he drinking and said strange phrase .is all ok ?
    • ! i have shocked and i make as i didn t heard him !
    • after a few second he said why you styed allways at home , we tried to contact with you many times but you allways at home and we cant send any body to contact with you , i am lucky today becuase i have found you , oh my god , i said, and i look to hime and said sorry i thing you are talking with the wrrong person !! he said no , we have no time stop trying to be funny , what about Clamus did you found him good mate in your appartment, dont worry he is our agent and if we want to make any thing it is too easy to do , i said oh god who are you and what do you want of me , he said keep quite dont cry, he stand up and said follow me i have something for you you have to take it , after that he went out and when i tried to folow him h........

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    • about two days a go i have met one peson in the city center , i dont remember realy when i have met him before, but when he began to talk with me i have shocked becuase he called me by wrrong name , but i make as everything is right, i like to know who this person and why he look at me while i am walking in the street , and why he came to the same coffee shop where i have take coffe , and he look like i have seen him before, after he got his coffee he began to talk with me without looking at me when he drinking and said strange phrase .is all ok ?
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    • aAbout two days a go i have, I met onea person in the city center , i. I really don't remember realy when iI have met him before, but when he began to talk with me i have, I've got shocked. becuase hHe called me by the wrrong name , but i make as everything is right, i likeI didn't mind, because I wanted to know who thise person was and why he looked at me while i amI was walking ion the street , and. Besides that, why he came to the same coffee shop where i have take coffe , and he lookas me and why I felt like i haI've seen him before,¶after. Then he got his coffee heand began to talk with me without looking at me when he drinking and said strange phrase .. While drinking he asked me this strange question: is all ok ?
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    • aAbout two days a go i haveI met onea person in the city center , i dont remember realy when i have*. I can't really remember the last time I met him before, but when he began to talk with me i haveI was shocked * becuause he called me by the wrrong name , but i make as everything is right, iI carry on regardless as if everything were alright. I would like to know who this person is and why he looked at me while i amI was walking in the street , and why he came to the same coffee shop where iI have takemy coffe , and e. Furthermore*, I wonder why he looks like isomeone I have seen him before,¶a. After he gobought his coffee he began to talk with me without even looking at me when he drinking and said strange phrase .is all. Then, whilst drinking,he asked this strange phrase; "Is everything ok ?"
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    • aAbout two days a go i have met one pes, I met someone in the city center , i. I don't remember realy when i haally remember ever meeting him before, butand when he began to talk with me i have shockI was surprised becuause he called me bythe wrrong name , but i make as everything is right, i like. However, I pretended everything was fine. I wanted to know who this person andwas, why he look atwatched me while i amI was walking in the street , and why he came to the same coffee shop where i have take coffe , and he look like i have seen him before,¶aas me. In fact, he looked familiar.¶After he got his coffee he began to talkspeaking with me without looking at me when he drinking and said strange phrase .is alland said something strange. Is everything ok ?
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    • aAbout two days a go i have met one pesmet someone in the city center , i. I don't remember really when i have met him before, but when he began to talk withto me i havewas shocked becuause he called me by a wrrong name , ,¶but i makde asure that everything is right, i. I would like to know who was this person and why he looked at me while i amwas walking in the street , and why. Why did he caome to the same coffee shop where i have take coffe , and he look like used to have coffee.¶He looks as though i have seen him before,¶a. After he gothad(took) his coffee he began to talk withto me without looking at me also when he was drinking andhe said strange phrase .is. Is all ok ?
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    • after a few second he said why you styed allways at home , we tried to contact with you many times but you allways at home and we cant send any body to contact with you , i am lucky today becuase i have found you , oh my god , i said, and i look to hime and said sorry i thing you are talking with the wrrong person !! he said no , we have no time stop trying to be funny , what about Clamus did you found him good mate in your appartment, dont worry he is our agent and if we want to make any thing it is too easy to do , i said oh god who are you and what do you want of me , he said keep quite dont cry, he stand up and said follow me i have something for you you have to take it , after that he went out and when i tried to folow him h........
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    • ¶after aA few seconds later, he said : why do you stayed allways at home , w? We've tried to contact with you many times but you alre always at home and we canouldn't send any body to contact with you , ¶i ayou. I'm lucky today becuause i I have found you , o. Oh my gGod , iI said, and i look to. Then I looked at hime and said: sorry i, I thingk you are talking with the wrrong person !! hHe said : no , we have no time s! Stop trying to be funny , wWhat about Clamus , did you found him good mate in your appartment, dto be a good mate? Don't worry h. He is our agent and if we wanted to make any bad thing it is too, that would be easy to do , i. Next I said: oOh gGod! wWho are you and what do you want of me , hfrom me? He said: keep quite d. Don't cry, ¶h. He stanood up and said: follow me i, I have something for you y. You have to take it ,¶a. After that he went out and, when i I tried to follow him, h........
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    • ¶aAfter a few seconds he said why you styedasked, "Why do you allways stay at home , w? We tried to contact with you so many times before but you were allways at home , and it's not like we cant send any body to contact with you , ¶isomeone out to look for you!¶I am lucky today becuause i I have found you , o.¶"Oh my god ", iI said, and iI look toed at hime and said, "I'm sorry ibut I thingk you are talking with the wrrong person !! h!"¶He said no , "No, we have no time stop trying to be funny , w. What about Clamus , did you fouind him to be a good mate in your appartment, d? Don't worry , he is our agent and if we want to makedo any thing it is toowould be easy to do , i." ¶I said o, "Oh god w. Who are you and what do you want of me , hfrom me?"¶He said k, "Keep quite, don't cry,."hHe stands up and said fys, "Follow me i, I have something for you you have tomust take it ,¶after that."¶Afterwards he went out and when i I tried to follow him h........
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    • ¶aAfter a few seconds he said w"Why do you styed allways stay at home , w? We tried to contact with you many times , but you alre always at home and we can't send any body to contact with you ,.iI am lucky today becuase i have found you , oI ran into you today." "Oh my god , i," I said, and iI look toed at hime and said s"Sorry iI thingk you are talking with to the wrrong person !! h!" He said no "No, we don't have no time s. Stop trying to be funny , w. What about Clamus did? Do you fouind him good mate in your appartment, dto be a good flatmate? Don't worry , he is our agent and if we want to makedo any thing it is toovery easy to do , i. I said o, "Oh god , who are you and what do you want of me , hfrom me?" He said k"Keep quitet, dont cry,."hHe stanood up and said f"Follow me i. I have something for you y. You have to take it ,¶a."¶After that he went out , and when iI tried to follow him h........
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