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    • Finally, nowadays it becomes more and more popular to keep to a diet, but not so many people know, that it is very harmful for their health.
    • Even if you have some problems with your extra weight you’d better consult a professional dietitian and do not go for self-slimming.
    • If you do not suffer from obesity just try to practice sports.
    • Exercising can improve your physical abilities, make you more enduring, boost your immune system, control your weight and as a result you will be full of energy and in high spirits.
    • Another good way is to become vegetarian.
    • A diet free from meet has all the vitamins, minerals and protein you need.
    • It can be hard for the first time but once a steady eating pattern has been established your body will feel more comfortable.
    • All in all, you can see, that it is not an easy thing to keep your health in a proper state.
    • But if you try to follow at least one or two of the above-listed advice you will feel much better and very soon you will get used to all these rules of healthy eating.

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    • Finally, nowadays it becomes more and more popular to keep to a diet, but not so many people know, that it is very harmful for their health.
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    • Finally, nowadays it becomes more and more popular to keep to a diet, but not soement, de nos jours il est de plus courant de faire un régime, manyis people know, that it is very harmful for their healthu de gens savent, que c'est très mauvais pour leur santé.
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    • Finally, nNowadays, it becomes more andfinally is starting to be more popular to keep tofollow a diet, but not so many people know, that it is very harmful for their health.
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    • Finally, nowadays it becomes more and more popular to keep to a diet, but not so many peopleIt is popular nowadays for people to take up one diet or another. But not many know, that it is verycould be harmful for their health.
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    • Even if you have some problems with your extra weight you’d better consult a professional dietitian and do not go for self-slimming.
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    • Even if you have some problems with your extra weight you’d better consult a professional dietitian and do not go for self-slimmingMême si vous avez quelques problèmes avec votre surpoids, vous devriez consulter un diététicien professionnel et ne pas entreprendre un régime seul.
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    • Even if you have some problems with your extra weight you’d better consult a professional dietitian and do not go for self-slimming.
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    • Even if you have some problems with your extra weight you’d better consult a professional dietitian and do not go for self-slimmingnot take up a dieting regime on your own.
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    • Exercising can improve your physical abilities, make you more enduring, boost your immune system, control your weight and as a result you will be full of energy and in high spirits.
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    • Exercising can improve your physical abilities, make you more enduring, boost your immune system, control your weight and as a result you will be full of energy and in high spiritsFaire de l'exercice peut améliorer vos capacités physiques, vous rendre plus endurant, renforcer votre système immunitaire, vous permettre de surveiller votre poids et vous serez plein d'énergie et de bonne humeur.
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    • Exercising can improve your physical abilities, make you more enduringance ready, boost your immune system, control your weight and as a result you will be full of energy and in high -spirits.
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    • Exercising can improve your physical abilities, make you moreincrease your enduringance, boost your immune system, control your weight and as a result you will be full of energy and in high spirits.
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    • It can be hard for the first time but once a steady eating pattern has been established your body will feel more comfortable.
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    • It can be hard for the first time but once a steady eating pattern has been established your body will feel more comfortableAu début celà peut être difficile mais une fois que des habitudes alimentaires ont été établies, vous vous sentirez mieux dans votre corps.
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    • It can be hard for athe first time but once a steady eating pattern has been established your body will feel more comfortable in your body.
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    • But if you try to follow at least one or two of the above-listed advice you will feel much better and very soon you will get used to all these rules of healthy eating.
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    • But if you try to follow at least one or two of the above-listed advice you will feel much better and very soon you will get used to all these rules of healthy eatingMais, si vous essayez de suivre au moins un ou deux conseils de la liste ci- dessus vous vous sentirez mieux et très vite vous serez habitués ces règles et mangerez sainement. ¶
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    • But if you try to follow at least one or two of the above-listed pieces of advice you will feel much better and very soon you will get used to all these rules ofthe healthy eating rules. ¶
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    • But if you try to follow at least one or two of the above-dvice listed advicebove, you will feel much better and very soon you will get used to all these rules of healthy eating. eating healthy.
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