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  • Our company is the developing company on sale of modern gadgets.
    • Our partners are generally the Russian companies, among the foreign companies of the most known the "Samsung" is.
    • For representation of production we are ready to create the separate new direction in company activity.
    • Our researches of the Russian market showed that the most perspective branch on sales in Russia now is the Internet trade, the greatest number of sales of similar goods is carried out on the Internet therefore to present production we initially plan on the Internet, by means of online store creation.
    • Also in this activity we would like to place the main emphasis on distribution of production in regions of Russia, by cooperation with the large companies from various regions of the country.
    • In development we would like to open outlets on sale of production in large shopping centers of Moscow and other cities of Russia.

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

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    • Our researches of the Russian market showed that the most perspective branch on sales in Russia now is the Internet trade, the greatest number of sales of similar goods is carried out on the Internet therefore to present production we initially plan on the Internet, by means of online store creation.
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    • Our researches ofn the Russian market showed that the most perspective branch on salesstrongest sales sector in Russia now is the Internet trade, the greatest number of sales of similar goods is carried out on the Internet, therefore to present our production we initially plan on the Internet, by means of online store creation.
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    • Also in this activity we would like to place the main emphasis on distribution of production in regions of Russia, by cooperation with the large companies from various regions of the country.
      Vota adesso!
    • Also in this activity we would like to place the main emphasis on distribution of production in various regions of Russia, by cooperation with the large companies from variousthese regions of the country.
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      Vota adesso!
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