Correções

AJUDE A CORRIGIR AGORA!corrigido

Texto de Jusdepamplemousse - English

  • Gap year

    • If I had the chance to do the Gap Year , I think the hardest part will be choosing my destination.
    • Indeed , the world will offer me, which represent a vast field of exploration really !
  • I will look instead for Asian countries as this would be a total change of scenery.
    • China is attractive to its wall , Japan for its unique culture and out of common or South Korea for the fantastic scenery it has to offer.
    • If possible, I 'd like to do voluntary work in several countries to assist people in need.
  • This trip can prove to be rewarding because it opens my mind to unknown horizons.
    • But if I had to choose between these three countries , I would choose South Korea in order to help orphans in besoin.Je think I can gain much more than they in this experiment.
    • Introverted nature, I love the sharing and exchange , this will allow me to go beyond my limits.
    • It will also help me in the world of work as it will help me develop qualities that can be acquired in our daily lives .
    • We discover in a new light , as this trip will allow us to change our monotony.
    • I think it can be a really amazing and interesting experience , especially in Korea because I think life is more active .
    • We can also consider this as a problem.
  • I think the biggest problem is the language .
    • Indeed , it was difficult air both written and oral.
    • We do not choose Gap Year on a whim , we have to think long to prepare well for it at a cost .
    • Indeed , if I want to stay there , I'll have to find me a job in order to meet my needs .
    • Despite the fact that I do not know speak a single Korean word , English is the international language .
    • If the country was not in a stable climate with North Korea, I'll Gap Year on the field !

Por favor, ajude à corrigir cada sentença! - English