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  • My first text

    • I have sit for 30 minutes to try to write this text.
    • And you see that i don't write a text.
    • I dont't think that it soo hard.
    • Read and write in english is not equally.
    • But I hope you.
  • And you give me advice.
    • How can i improve to writing?

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