添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

Isabeladscからのテキスト - English

  • SHADY FEELINGS

    • A man enjoys of saying for his girlfriend that he loves her.
    • But year after year, he does not even get engaged.
  • What kind of love is this?
    • I don't understand why a man enjoys a relationship knowing this woman can find a better partner and leave him.
    • Specially when this woman is lovely, sensitive and understanding.
    • I wonder if it happens because this man thinks he is able to find a better woman?
    • A prettier one? A rich one?
    • When he gets aged, he will realize he lost much time of choosing a woman to get married.
    • He maybe never finds this woman of his dreams...

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English