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Сообщение от SophiaD - English

  • Story: the cliché

  • I am the perfect cliché, with a dream life. 21 years old.
  • Little rich brat, son of wealthy parents.
  • Surrounded by friends and every girls were at my feet.
  • A dude with the perfect schooling and a destiny already written.
  • Father obsessed with his job, level-headed lawyer who wants the perfect son.
  • Mother addicted to botox injections, neurotic and shooted up to Prozac.
  • Holiday home in the Hamptons, and private golf club. Law school.
  • Football team captain and owner of a red Lamborghini.
  • Kyle Jordan, yeah, the hell of a cliché.
  • And then I met him.
  • Him and his green yes.
  • Him and his passion to make bullshit.
  • Him and his disease. Jake Hamson.
  • 19 years old Obsessive-compulsive disorder.
  • Personality disorder. Withdrawning.
  • Psychosis Neurosis Violence.
  • Silence Borderline personality disorder.
  • I wish I could be a cliché.
  • He turned my life upside down.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English