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Сообщение от Cesario2nd - English

    • Memo to all Staff Part 2

    • Topic of Memo inferior quality.
    • Last week after the exihibition in Melbourne i met Mr.ginger from JI department Store from Australia.
    • He was a former Customer of our Company an in the past he was critical most of the time.
    • However i persuaded after a small talk Mr.ginger to get our Service once again.
  • For that reason it is absoluteley necessary to stay on course.
    • We should use our energy to do it much bether than in the Past.
    • Mr.ginger is very interested in womens and children shoes and Trainers.
    • In the Past the Problem was the inferior Quality of each supplier.
    • Now i will arrange a Meeting with Mr. ginger in our store and you should prepare the Display of all shoes he does want to see.
    • The very best Location to present is the 3rd.
    • Floor behind the cash box.
    • Take care that the flowers have a secure Position.
    • Last but not least don´t stock any longer shoes from These supplier.
    • Please do it at your very best, it´s not a secret every customer count´s.
    • Mr. Johnson Office 4

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