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  • Memorable day of my life...please check my grammar and wording

    • Our life is a combination of memorable days.Out of all days some days are forgotten while others are so special and heartfelt that we can not forget them and they remain fresh in our minds.Memories remain inside us forever and walk with us.
    • I'd say the most memorable day for me was my O 'level result day.
    • It was the mid of January and my result of G.C.E O' level was to be declared on the day.
    • I had been waiting for the day with anxiety and curiosity.I got up early in the morning on my result day.I was somewhat uneasy and restless.My mind was swinging between hope and fear.It was strange stage of anxiety and expectation.My parents had high expectation of me.
    • On the one side i was confident about my result and on the other side i was little bit anxious,like every student.In short,I was in disturbed state of mind.I sat on my bed and opened my laptop,pray to god for minute and started searching for my result on their website.
    • Every second seemed to be an eternity for me at that time.I grew more impatient with each passing time.I wondered how long it would take to declare the result.Impatience is innate in every human.We can't run from it.
    • After then it was finally declared and I found myself standing on the illuminate path of success.
    • The whole atmosphere of the house at once changed.
    • After seeing my result I was so much happy and feeling proud.
    • I had never been dishonest or mendacious with my studies and that's the reason for my success .
    • Someone really said the truth,"The results you achieve will be in direct proportion to the effort you apply." Getting a higher mask on my exam is the greatest accomplishment for me.

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    • Our life is a combination of memorable days.Out of all days some days are forgotten while others are so special and heartfelt that we can not forget them and they remain fresh in our minds.Memories remain inside us forever and walk with us.
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    • Our lLife is a combination of mundane, and memorable days.Out of all days s Some days are forgotten while others are so special and heartfeltemotional (?) that we can not forget them, and they remain fresh in our minds.M These memories remain inside us forever and walktravel with us.
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    • I had been waiting for the day with anxiety and curiosity.I got up early in the morning on my result day.I was somewhat uneasy and restless.My mind was swinging between hope and fear.It was strange stage of anxiety and expectation.My parents had high expectation of me.
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    • I had been waiting for theis day with anxiety and curiosity. I got up early in the morning, on my result day.I was somewhat uneasy and restless. My mind was swinging between hope and fear. It was a strange stagte of anxiety and expectation. My parents had high expectation ofs for me.
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    • On the one side i was confident about my result and on the other side i was little bit anxious,like every student.In short,I was in disturbed state of mind.I sat on my bed and opened my laptop,pray to god for minute and started searching for my result on their website.
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    • On the one side iI was confident about mythat I would get a good result, and on the other side iI was a little bit anxious, like every student. In short, I was in a disturbed state of mind. I sat on my bed and opened my laptop, prayed to gGod for a minute, and started searching for my result on their website.
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    • Every second seemed to be an eternity for me at that time.I grew more impatient with each passing time.I wondered how long it would take to declare the result.Impatience is innate in every human.We can't run from it.
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    • Every second seemed to be an eternity for me at that time. I grew more and more impatient with each passing time.as time passed. I wondered how long it would take to declare the result. Impatience is innate in every human.We can't run from it.
    • Every second seemed to be an eternity for me at that time. I grew more impatient with each passing timminute. I wondered how long it would take to declare the result.for my result to be declared. Impatience is innate in every human. We can't run from it.
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    • Someone really said the truth,"The results you achieve will be in direct proportion to the effort you apply." Getting a higher mask on my exam is the greatest accomplishment for me.
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    • Someone really said the truth,"The results you achieve will be in direct proportion to the effort you apply." Getting a higher masrk on my exam is the greatest accomplishment for me. ¶
    • Someone reallyonce said the following truth,": 'The results you achieve will be in direct proportion to the effort you apply." Getting a higher masrk on my exam is the greatest accomplishment for me. ¶
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