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    • Hi everybody!!! today im wake up at 9:00 AM because its saturday, take a shower and shave the beard, later take the breakfast with my wife and we clean the home, aboute eleven o'clock we went to the park with our son.
    • Now we are preparing the lunch.
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    • Hi everybody!!! today im wake up at 9:00 AM because its saturday, take a shower and shave the beard, later take the breakfast with my wife and we clean the home, aboute eleven o'clock we went to the park with our son.
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    • Hi everybody!!! today im waoke up at 9:00 AM because its saturday, takeook a shower and shave the beardd myself, later takeook the breakfast with my wife and we cleaned the home, aboute eleven o'clock we went to the park with our son.
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    • Hi everybody!!! today imI waoke up at 9:00 AM because it's saturday, taI tooke a shower and shave the beard, later takeI took the breakfast with my wife and we cleaned the home, a. Aboute eleven o'clock we went to the park with our son.
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    • Hi everybody!!! tToday imI waoke up at 9:00 AM am because its sSaturday, take. I took a shower and shave thed/trimmed my beard, then later take theI had breakfast with my wife and together we cleaned the home,use. At aboute eleven o'clock we went to the park with our son.
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