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- i will visite usa in the month of june and i want emprouve my english and when i go to the states i hope that i dont have problemes to contact people and make relationship

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- i will visite usa in the month of june and i want emprouve my english and when i go to the states i hope that i dont have problemes to contact people and make relationship
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