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  • Postgraduate Interview

    • Please talk something about your internship in kindergarten.
  • I think this internship is the most valuable experience for me to be a preschool teacher.
    • The kind principle of the kindergarten said that a child’s habits established in this age would be with them throughout their life.
    • She has devote all herself to education and she was so appreciated my courage to have a try from practical teaching, so she provide me with that opportunity.
    • I cherished and enjoyed the time spent with children, because they are, as far as i am consider, the most purest thing in the world.
    • I know that they are in the formative year and i want to be a responsible teacher, so i participated in teacher qualification training, absorb knowledge from extracurricular reading and tried to apply theory into practice.
    • For example, I appreciated the theory ‘Learning by Playing’ researched and implemented by John Dewey.
    • I made a big box containing a paper-made tiger, rabbit and other animals with their mouths open.
    • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that the children could feed the paper-made animals.
  • This game provides a practical way for children to acquire basic knowledge, and they may be inspired to get more information about animals and their foods after the game.
  • Helping those children make progress bit by bit gave me great happiness, whatever the weather was, they were my sunshine.

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    • The kind principle of the kindergarten said that a child’s habits established in this age would be with them throughout their life.
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    • The kind principle of the kindergarten said that a child’s habits established inat this age, would be with them throughout their entire life.
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    • The kind principle of the kindergarten said that a child’s habits established Wisdom tells us that the habits children develop at kindergarten will continue to shine this age would be with them throughoutrough the rest of their lifeves.
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    • The kindKnown principles of the kindergarten saiders state that a child’s habits are established during this age period, and would be with them throughout their life.
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    • She has devote all herself to education and she was so appreciated my courage to have a try from practical teaching, so she provide me with that opportunity.
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    • She has devote alld herself to education and she was so appreciatedive of my courage to have a try frommake the attempt at practical teaching, so she provided me with that opportunity.
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    • She has wholly devote alld herself to education, and she was so appreciated by my courage to have a tryattempt from practical teaching, so she provide me withoffered me that opportunity.
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    • I cherished and enjoyed the time spent with children, because they are, as far as i am consider, the most purest thing in the world.
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    • I cherished and enjoyed the time spent with children, because they are, - as far as iI am consider,cerned - the most purest thing in the world.
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    • I cherished and enjoyed the time I spent with the children, because they are, as far as i amI consider, they are the most purest thing in the world.
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    • I know that they are in the formative year and i want to be a responsible teacher, so i participated in teacher qualification training, absorb knowledge from extracurricular reading and tried to apply theory into practice.
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    • I know that they are in the formative year and iI want to be a responsible teacher, so iI participated in teacher qualification training, absorbed knowledge from extracurricular reading and tried to apply theory into practice.
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    • I know that they are in their formative years, and iI want to be a responsible teacher, so iI participated in a teachers qualification training,. I absorbed knowledge from extracurricular readings and tried to apply theory into practice.
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    • For example, I appreciated the theory ‘Learning by Playing’ researched and implemented by John Dewey.
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    • For example, I appreciated the theory ‘Learning by Playing’ which was researched and implemented by John Dewey.
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    • For example, I appreciated the insights in John Dewey's theory of ‘Learning by Playing’ researched and implemented by John Dewey.
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    • I made a big box containing a paper-made tiger, rabbit and other animals with their mouths open.
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    • I madecrafted a big box containing a paper-madorigami animals; orange tigers, green rabbits, and many other animals with their mouths openstretched open, like a big smile when the children interacted with them.
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    • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that the children could feed the paper-made animals.
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    • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that the children could feed the paper-made animals.
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    • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that the children could feed the paper-madeorigami animals.
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    • This game provides a practical way for children to acquire basic knowledge, and they may be inspired to get more information about animals and their foods after the game.
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