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    • postgraduate interview

    • Self introduction My name is Li Minyan and you can call me Mia.
    • I was born in Guangzhou and I graduated from Guangdong Ocean University in 2012.
    • During my study period, I took a gap year which is not a normal choice for Chinese graduates.
    • Through reading books, communicating with friends, working and thinking deeply, I gain a better understanding of myself and now have a complete faith that I can devote myself to a career in preschool education.
  • It is the gap year provided me with an opportunity to grow into a person with self-discipline, confidence and love of learning.
    • In 2013, I worked as a practice teacher in Ascot Garden Kindergarten and it is the most valuable experience for me to become a preschool teacher.
    • Besides, I have extensive hobbies, such as drawing, reading, hiking, playing guzheng and playing piano.
    • I am looking forward to study in your university so that I can get more chances to learn from all kinds of people.
    • 浸会:I think I could have a more all-round development because of the broad-based, creativity-inspiring education provided by your university. Thanks!
    • why do you want to study in hk?
    • To choose hk to pursue further study is factored by some reasons.
    • First of all i have a deep faith that i want to devote myself into education of early childhood and a strong desire to absorb more knowledge after i worked as a teacher in ascot kindergarten.
    • Secondly Though i can have further study in mainland China or other countries, i still regard the education of hk as the pioneer of education in china, and what i learn from there would be more likely to be adopted in mainland china.
    • Also the advantages of hk postgraduate education attract me a lot such as advanced education methods, creative idea of education and liberal study atmosphere.
    • Have you applied for other schools?
    • Yes, i applied the some major in another school, but your school is my preference.
    • 教院:because hk institution of education is the unique university of education Not only can the courses enable me to acquire systematical knowledge, but also i heard that the library facilities there is impressed, especially for education.
  • I think it would be a paradise for me to further my study.
    • 浸会:because baptist university has good reputation in china these is a center for child development, i think if i have the chance to be a volunteer there, i could gain more hands-on experience.
    • I am so agree with the idea of whole person education and looking forward to be nurtured in that way.
    • Anything you know about hk?
    • To be honest, i have never been to hk, but i got an impress through the mass media.
    • Hk is thought to be the combination of western and eastern.
    • In my view, hk is also an integration of modernization and tradition.
    • On one hand, hk is the leader of fashion and on the other hand it gives emphasis to traditional conservation.
    • How do you know your university?
    • I search from internet and investigate the course structures through the official website.
    • Which school did you graduate?
    • I graduated from guangdong ocean university.
  • What program are you applying for?
    • Hong Kong Institution of Education:master of education programme /area of focus: early childhood eduction Baptist University:master of education programme/child and adolescent development concentration What’s your advantage for this program?
    • Firstly, from years of study, I now possess clear logic, study transfer ability and have insight into my own personality.
    • So i am clear about teacher is not only what i want to do but also what i am suitable to do.
    • Secondly, i have an experience of internship in ascot kindergarten so i have a sensitive mind to connect practice and theory.
    • Problems: 浸会:what is problem behaviour?
  • How to help children to find out their talent?
    • How to help children’s make progress in moral development in kindergarten?
    • 教院:In mainland china, often the importance of community is easily ignored.
  • How to make good use of the resources?
  • (Home-School-Community Partnerships in Diverse Society Module) How to nurture children’s sense of well-being?(Nurturing Social-Emotional Well-being of Children Module) What is your future plan?
    • Short term plan is that i will be volunteering or working in some organizations related to children when studying in hk.
    • My long term plan is that i will concerned the preschool education of stay-in-home children in mainland china, because i believe it has profound influence on individuals and society.
    • Most of these children’s parents work in another cities when children go to primary school.
  • This means most of those children can have the company of parents before 5 or 6 years old.
    • So if we can help stay-in-home children in this important time and with the help of their parents, it would have a great effect on children’s future and the prospect of china.

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