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  • Mini Essay: Dangerous Sports

  • Nowadays, people do dangerous sports.
    • It can be snowboarding, base jumping, street racing and so on.
  • They like doing it, although it can be harmful to their health and life.
    • I am going to discuss ways how to participants can manage those risks.
    • First of all, some members of a society enjoy practicing risky activities, because they have a boring life.
    • Doing extreme sports, they feel alive.
    • They have usually an adrenalin shot when take risky action.
    • To illustrate, I have a brother.
  • He likes snowboarding.
    • He takes a vacation in winter and goes in the mountains.
  • There he enjoys his rides from the top of mountain.
    • However, in real life he has a quiet job and sometimes it does not interesting to him.
    • Therefore, he likes that a very dangerous sport.
    • The most important is to save health and life of participants from unsafe activities.
    • Firstly, where are doing those kinds of sports should be an experience medical group with the necessary equipment.
  • Secondly, people should protect themselves from injuries.
    • It can be protection clothes and an insurance.
  • For example, my brother has protection gears, but he does not have any medical or life insurance contract.
    • In my opinion, he should definitely buy one of them.
    • It would help to solve problems if something wrong happened.
  • To conclude, there are many kinds of dangerous sports.
  • Therefore, participants should protect themselves from potential risks.

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