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從TimSonnhalter來的文本 - English

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    • Hello, I learn english since 9 month.
    • I like the language and it is my dream to life in America.
  • I was in America two years ago.
    • The athmospere was so beautyfull and had fascinated me.
    • I hope that my english isn't so bad and I wish you a good day.
    • yours sincerely, Tim

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