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- Why I need to improve my english?
- Hi, I´m a petty officer in the spanish navy.
- And if I want to apply to a job outside of Spain I have to certify that I´m able to keep a normal conversation with natives and non natives english speackers.
- So, please try to get a little time to correct my writing and if you want we can change spanish for english conversation by skype.

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- Why I need to improve my english?
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- Hi, I´m a petty officer in the spanish navy.
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- Hi,! I´m a petty officer in the sSpanish navy.
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- And if I want to apply to a job outside of Spain I have to certify that I´m able to keep a normal conversation with natives and non natives english speackers.
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- ~~And i~~If I want to apply tofor a job outside of Spain, I have to ~~certify~~prove that I´m able to ~~keep~~have a normal conversation with natives and non -native~~s e~~ English speackers.
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- So, please try to get a little time to correct my writing and if you want we can change spanish for english conversation by skype.
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- So, please try to ~~get~~spend a little time to correct my writing and if you ~~want we can~~ like, we can have a conversation exchange sin Spanish ~~for e~~and English ~~conversation by s~~via Skype.
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