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Today
- Today i'm very happy, because i leaved early my job! i went at english school.
The lesson was interesting!
- My teacher learned me the past simple!!

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句子 1
- Today i'm very happy, because i leaved early my job! i went at english school.
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- Today i'm very happy, because i le~~aved early my job! i~~ft my job early! Then I went ~~at e~~to English school.
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句子 2
- The lesson was interesting!
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句子 3
- My teacher learned me the past simple!!
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- My teacher ~~learned~~taught me the past simple tense!!
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