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hello everybody my experience in english
- hello everybody i'm here because my english level is medium, and for my work job, i need to talk every day with many people.
- my first experience in english was in a college school, my teacher was very ugly and look like a witch.
but many years after i have liked to learn and talk in english.(is not easy)

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- hello everybody i'm here because my english level is medium, and for my work job, i need to talk every day with many people.
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- hHello everybody i, I'm here because my eEnglish level is medium, and for my work ~~job~~, iI need to talk ~~every day with~~to many people everyday.
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- my first experience in english was in a college school, my teacher was very ugly and look like a witch.
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- but many years after i have liked to learn and talk in english.(is not easy)
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