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    • First time always hurts

    • I used to hear my mom saying this quote, I didn't believe in it until I got old.
    • I remember my first day at school, I hated everything about it, the teachers, how long I stay there, how much homework I take and even hated the kids, when I had got home, my mom said that " you hate it cause it's your first time there" as "first time always hurts", I was like "she have got to be kidding me, I am not going to love this shit or something !".
    • But after that I enjoyed my school life and I do still enjoy it, I love my friends, my teachers and even the school it self!
    • I believed in the quote only after falling in love. when I talked to the guy I used to love, he was really cold, he was talking like we are talking daily although it has been a long time since we last talked and met.
  • I realized how much he changed and that really hurt me so I decided to get over him.
  • As long as it's so easy for me to get over something I taught I'm getting over him in at most two weeks, but here I am still thinking of him and trying to figure out the reason why he was that cold and the reason why he changed.
  • And that made me believe in the quote as I didn't need anybody to tell me so, I said it my self "FIRST TIME ALWAYS HURTS".
  • Feel free to correct :) Have a nice day !

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    • I remember my first day at school, I hated everything about it, the teachers, how long I stay there, how much homework I take and even hated the kids, when I had got home, my mom said that " you hate it cause it's your first time there" as "first time always hurts", I was like "she have got to be kidding me, I am not going to love this shit or something !".
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    • I remember my first day at school,. I hated everything about it,; the teachers, how long I stay therethe day was, how much homework I take and I even hated the other kids, w. When I had got home, my mom said that, " you hate it because it's your first time there" as "in other words, "the first time always hurts",. I was like "she haves got to be kidding me,. I am not ever going to love this shit or something ike school!".
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    • I believed in the quote only after falling in love. when I talked to the guy I used to love, he was really cold, he was talking like we are talking daily although it has been a long time since we last talked and met.
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    • I believed in the quote only after falling in love. wWhen I talked to the guy I used to love, he was really cold, h. He spoke was talking likhough we we are talking everydaily although it hasd been a long time since we last talked and met.saw each other.
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    • As long as it's so easy for me to get over something I taught I'm getting over him in at most two weeks, but here I am still thinking of him and trying to figure out the reason why he was that cold and the reason why he changed.
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