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    • Hi, I'm french and I have a dream which was: "leave France to go California", I know the life is very expansive but I like the life style, and also I love motocross and it's a sport very important at USA.
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    • Hi, I'm french and I have a dream which was: "leave France to go California", I know the life is very expansive but I like the life style, and also I love motocross and it's a sport very important at USA.
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    • Hi, I'm french and I have a dream which was: "leave France to go to California", I know the life is very expaensive but I like the life style, and also I love motocross and it's a sport very important at USA.
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    • Hi, I'm french and I have a dream which was: "leave France to go to California", I know the life is very expaensive but I like the life's style, and also. I love motocross and it's a sport very important atin USA.
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    • Hi, I'm french and I have a dream which was: "my dream is to leave France and to go to California",. I know the life is very expansivat the level of life is high there but I like the american life style, and. I also I love motocross and it'which is a sport very important atpular sport in the USA.
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    • Hi, I'm french and I have a dream which wasis : "leave France to go California", I knoew the lifit would be is very expaensive dream, but I like the life style, and also .I love motocross andlso, it's a sport very important atsport in USA.
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    • If you want, you can add me in you're contact and help me to improve my english and also speak about the american life or french life
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    • If you want, you can add me into you'rer contacts and help me to improve my english and also spea. We can talk about the american life or french lifestyles.
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    • If you want, you can add me in you'rer contact, and you can help me to improve my english, and also speawe can talk about the american life or french life.
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