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  • New year festival in Viet Nam

  • Many people may think that new year festival is a very happy but worried for poor I have ever experienced this feeling I remember it was in 2010 when I went to my grandmother’s house that was on 28th of lunar year everybody was making round sticky rice cake , stuffed sticky rice cake and I couldn’t cook the cake therefore I helped to prepare the material for cake with my grandmother it usually is thought that in traditional .
  • New year, people should have apricot blossom, jellied meat, pig trotters, dried bamboo shorts, lean pork paste, pickled onion, pickled small leeks beside people should buy roasted water melon seeds, dried candied fruits and prepare to workship the ancestors with five fruit tray however, some of the poor can not afford to buy such food I witness once that my grandmother shared the poor family with food and cake.
  • They really were happy and warm so the adults were very busy and worried everything like money and buy new something in house but children are very happy because they have beautiful clothes and receive lucky money on he lunar new year.
  • Many people go to pagoda to pray for health, peace, happiness , lucky and prosperity , my family, too but that year I spend the new year festival at grandmother’s house that is a new year I coulnot forget because I know how can a new year for poor.

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    • Many people may think that new year festival is a very happy but worried for poor I have ever experienced this feeling I remember it was in 2010 when I went to my grandmother’s house that was on 28th of lunar year everybody was making round sticky rice cake , stuffed sticky rice cake and I couldn’t cook the cake therefore I helped to prepare the material for cake with my grandmother it usually is thought that in traditional .
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    • New year, people should have apricot blossom, jellied meat, pig trotters, dried bamboo shorts, lean pork paste, pickled onion, pickled small leeks beside people should buy roasted water melon seeds, dried candied fruits and prepare to workship the ancestors with five fruit tray however, some of the poor can not afford to buy such food I witness once that my grandmother shared the poor family with food and cake.
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    • They really were happy and warm so the adults were very busy and worried everything like money and buy new something in house but children are very happy because they have beautiful clothes and receive lucky money on he lunar new year.
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    • Many people go to pagoda to pray for health, peace, happiness , lucky and prosperity , my family, too but that year I spend the new year festival at grandmother’s house that is a new year I coulnot forget because I know how can a new year for poor.
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