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Memo to all Staff
- Last week after the Exhibition in Birmingham I met Mr. Irvine from Jenkins Department Store from Scotland.
- He was a Fromer Customer of our Company and in the past he was critical most of the Time.

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- Last week after the Exhibition in Birmingham I met Mr. Irvine from Jenkins Department Store from Scotland.
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- Last week, after the Eexhibition in Birmingham, I met Mr. Irvine from the Jenkins Department Store from Scotland.
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- He was a Fromer Customer of our Company and in the past he was critical most of the Time.
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- He was a ~~Fro~~former Ccustomer of our Ccompany, and in the past he was critical most of the Ttime.
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