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    • I share in the life

    • I was lack experience person because I was 32 years old .
    • I cant describle my mine with you therefore you did not understand me and I apologize if I think wrong about you if you told truth when I don’t believe you .Im sorry once more I thought you met some trouble life but anyone meet trouble that is a rule but you should remember we improve our life .
    • I had ever met many trouble but I must to try my best and We can have family , lover or wife and husband when we were failure they support our It is important where did i wrong way and I live on hope and I satisfied my life althoughtIm a poor family .
    • I always hope you will understand when I share with you .You don’t sad and disappoint beside You should forget and look at future after You had a smile on your face and I love when you smile I tell truth ..
    • I like very much .
    • You can have a smile erveryday when you meet me ?
    • I know you are a good person and you show me while you were working in house .
    • I want to help you and take care of you like a family meal , sick , strong , happy , sad .
    • I cant understand why we have just met but I can share with you so much

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    • I cant describle my mine with you therefore you did not understand me and I apologize if I think wrong about you if you told truth when I don’t believe you .Im sorry once more I thought you met some trouble life but anyone meet trouble that is a rule but you should remember we improve our life .
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    • I cant describle what went on in my mined with you therefore you did not understand me and I apologize if I think wrong about you if you told truth when I don’t believe you .Im sorry once moredidn't believe you at the time . Again, I'm sorry. I thought you met somelived a troubled life but anyone meet trouble that is a rule but you should remember we improve our lifewho has ever gotten into trouble can change for the better .
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    • I can't describle my minethought with you, therefore you didwill not understand me and. I apologize if I think wrong about you if you told the truth when I don’t believe you .I. I'm sorry once more; I thought you met some trouble in your life, but anyone meets trouble that, which is a rule, but you should remember we improve our life ves.
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    • I can't describle my mined with you therefor, because you didwill not understand me, and I appologize if I think wrong about you, if you told me the truth w, then I don’ti believe in you .Im sorry once more, I thought you metare in some trouble in life, but anyone meet trouble that is a rule, but you should remember we improve our life .
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    • I had ever met many trouble but I must to try my best and We can have family , lover or wife and husband when we were failure they support our It is important where did i wrong way and I live on hope and I satisfied my life althoughtIm a poor family .
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    • I had never metexperienced many troubles, but I must to try my best and. We can have a family , lover or wife and husband w. When we weare a failure, they support our us. It is important for where did iI go the wrong way and. I live on hope and Ilife satisfied my lifeaction, althoughtI I'm a poor family .
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    • I had ever met many trouble, but I must to try my best, and Wwe can havebuild a family , lover or wife and husband wmarriage couple, When we were in failure they support our, it will support us if we together. It is important where did iif i go in a wrong way , and I live on hope and I satisfied my life also, althought Im a poor family .
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  • Sentence 4
    • I always hope you will understand when I share with you .You don’t sad and disappoint beside You should forget and look at future after You had a smile on your face and I love when you smile I tell truth ..
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    • I always hope you will understand when I share this with you . You don’t make me sad and have me disappoint ed, and beside Ys, you should forget and look ato the future afterwards. You had a smile on your face , and I truthfully love it when you smile I tell truth ..
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    • I always hope you will understand me, when I share this with you .You d Don’t be sad and disappoint besideed. You should forget all,and look at your future, and after You had, you will have a smile on your face and I love you when i see your smile I tell. and I am telling the truth ..
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    • I want to help you and take care of you like a family meal , sick , strong , happy , sad .
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    • I want to help you and take care of you like a family, whether for meal s, sick , strong , happy ,illness, keeping strong, being happy, or helping you not feel sad .
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    • I want to help you and take care of you like, example if a family needs meal , feel sick , strong , happy , sad .
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