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    • I am simple woman and not picky, I like funny and sometimes Imstrict.
    • I hope I will have a small family and the child, I want to take care of the family well and to share with him everything "sadness, happiness, failure, success," I dont like liars or cheaters .
  • I will not forgive I enjoy pampersing also my partner and me love nurtured in return.
    • I like yellow colour ,red,green.
    • I'm easy in eating .
    • I like to eat all ,lollol I like mushroom , salad, seafoods, pot… I like play game online and dance music when Imstress .
    • I love a scenery of nature, I will live a countryside when I was 50 years old and my hobby want to travel the whole world .
    • I have never go to bar because it is verycomplex .Let me give you a word advice I knew you were addicted to alcohol and beer I believe that u will give up a habit.You should take care of your health.
    • You will be bad health why you don’t pitiedyour self.
    • You think that you have never married anybody ?
    • Ok if you married when you can accept your wife who drink beer very much?
    • You accept or not accept.Do you like ? you and her live all of life when you have good health beside you will have children they will strong health, I don’t care when you married or not married but you must to take care of your health beside your mom will sad when she saw her son were addicted, she want to help you but you cant understand If you don’t agree more I will not advice no more .Sometimes you meet friends it doesnot matter when you drink beer it is no problem.
    • I willnot abandon you but you should perfect yourself.
  • I wish you will overcome a bad habit.

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    • I hope I will have a small family and the child, I want to take care of the family well and to share with him everything "sadness, happiness, failure, success," I dont like liars or cheaters .
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    • I hope, I will have a small family and thea child,. I want to take care of the family well and to share with him everything with my significant other: "sadness, happiness, failure, success,". I dont like liars or cheaters .
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    • I like to eat all ,lollol I like mushroom , salad, seafoods, pot… I like play game online and dance music when Imstress .
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    • I like to eat all ,nything. lollol I like mushroom s, salads, seafoods, pot…¶I like to play game online games and dance to music when Im'm stress ed.
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    • I love a scenery of nature, I will live a countryside when I was 50 years old and my hobby want to travel the whole world .
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    • I love athe scenery of nature,. I will live aon the countryside when I wasam 50 years old, and my hobby wantill be wanting to travel the whole world .
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    • I have never go to bar because it is verycomplex .Let me give you a word advice I knew you were addicted to alcohol and beer I believe that u will give up a habit.You should take care of your health.
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    • I have never gone to bars because it is very complex . Let me give you a word advice: I knew you were addicted to alcohol and beer. I believe that you will give up athe habit. You should take care of your health.
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    • You accept or not accept.Do you like ? you and her live all of life when you have good health beside you will have children they will strong health, I don’t care when you married or not married but you must to take care of your health beside your mom will sad when she saw her son were addicted, she want to help you but you cant understand If you don’t agree more I will not advice no more .Sometimes you meet friends it doesnot matter when you drink beer it is no problem.
      Vote now!
    • YDo you accept or not accept.Do you like liking it? yYou and her live all of lifeyour lives when you have good health, and besides, you will have children, and they will strongbe health,y. I don't care when you are married or not married, but you must to take care of your health b. Besides, your mom will be sad when she saw her son wereis addicted, s. She wants to help you, but you candon't understand. If you don’t agree morethen I will not adprovicde no anymore .advice. Sometimes when you meet friends it doesnot matterthere is no problem when you drink beer it is no problem.
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