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  • Choice of a book?!

  • I have decided to combine two subjects suggested here, so I will talk about my day and my best friend at the same time.
  • Today, I visited a library and I accidently saw a book that intrigued me.
    • At the beginning, I wanted to find a collection of poemes of an armenian poet who was born today (something symbolic), but then, I changed my mind, because I cought sight of a collection of poemes of R.
    • Tagore, a world-famous Indian writer of 20th century who had earned a Nobel prize.
    • It made me think of my best friend who likes Indian culture very much, so I wanted to buy it for her, thinking that the book would perhaps interest her.
    • I was just searching topics and exercises for my students, learning French, when I discovered this site.
  • I think, it's great!
  • I thank beforehand those who will check my texte.

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    • I have decided to combine two subjects suggested here, so I will talk about my day and my best friend at the same time.
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    • At the beginning, I wanted to find a collection of poemes of an armenian poet who was born today (something symbolic), but then, I changed my mind, because I cought sight of a collection of poemes of R.
      투표하세요!
    • At the beginning, I wanted to find a collection of poemes of an aArmenian poet who was born today (something symbolic), but then, I changed my mind, because I coaught sight of a collection of poemes of R.
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    • At the beginning, I wanted to find a collection of poemes ofby an aArmenian poet who was born today (something symbolic), but then, I changed my mind, because I coaught sight of a collection of poemes of R.
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    • It made me think of my best friend who likes Indian culture very much, so I wanted to buy it for her, thinking that the book would perhaps interest her.
      투표하세요!
    • It made me think of my best friend who likes Indian culture very much, so. I wanted to buy it for her, thinking that the book would perhaps interest her.
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      투표하세요!
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