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  • Hello, Jane!
    • Exuse me for the late response, I pass my exams now - the day after tomorrow, for example, I have music instruments exam.
    • It's not a big deal, but a little bit complicate for me because of Serbian, I am not an exellent speaker yet.
    • I have been starting to learn the language only in October, but I speak normal.
    • I was staying in Saint-Petersburg during 10 days.
  • (or 11?) It was wonderful!
    • I wasn't in the city 2 years, missed my friends,so, I was so happy to see them in the end!
    • I was in The Russian museum, visited Malevich's exibition.
    • Also I was in the Teatre, watched a good piece about The second World War, blocade of Leningrad (of cause you know this terrible historical moment of the city) made by my friends musicians and actors.
    • And etc. Yes, I suppouse visa is the general moment of this case.
    • Every time the matter is complicated by this ) But I am sure that went to France in the near future!
  • Thank you it will be my pleasure also to meet you in a real life!

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    • Exuse me for the late response, I pass my exams now - the day after tomorrow, for example, I have music instruments exam.
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    • Excuse me for the late response,. I pass my exams now - tam in the middle of taking exams right now. The day after tomorrow, for example, I have a music instruments exam.
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    • It's not a big deal, but a little bit complicate for me because of Serbian, I am not an exellent speaker yet.
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    • It's not a big deal, but a little bit complicated for me because ofmy native language is Serbian,. I am not an excellent -English?- speaker yet.
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    • I wasn't in the city 2 years, missed my friends,so, I was so happy to see them in the end!
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    • I wasn't in the cityhave not been to Saint Petersburg for 2 years,. I missed my friends,so, I was so happy to see them in the end!
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    • Also I was in the Teatre, watched a good piece about The second World War, blocade of Leningrad (of cause you know this terrible historical moment of the city) made by my friends musicians and actors.
      투표하세요!
    • Also I was in the Ttheatre,er and watched a good piece about Tthe second World War, blockade of Leningrad (of cause you know this terrible historical moment of the city) made by min the second World War. My friends, musicians and actors, made a great piece about this horrible moment in history.
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    • Every time the matter is complicated by this ) But I am sure that went to France in the near future!
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    • Every time the matter is complicated by this ) But I am sure that went toVisa's are always difficult, but I look forward to visiting France in the near future!
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