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    • The Sacco and Vanzetti case

    • Since 1917, the Unites-States had tryed to liquidate the Italian anarchist.
    • During the period of the most intense repression against the bolschevism had commyed the United States a lot of injustice against this people.
    • The most famous injustice of this "red Scare" period is the case of Sacco and Vanzetti.
    • This two men was Italians, who are immigrated in America, in Boston.
    • But after the fisrt world war had the Americans a real scare about the immigrant.
    • Nicola Sacco and Bartolomeo Vanzetti were anarchist and because of that hab thought the government that they were implicated in a murder.
    • The two men didn't hav criminal record, and the Authority had alsmot no proof to show that they were guilty.
    • But that didn't impede the government to decided that they were liable of the murder, and to condenn the Italians to the death sentence.
    • There were a lot of demonstration subsequent the annonce of the verdict.
    • But after 7 years of jail were sacco ans Vanzetti executed in the electric chair, the 23 August 1927.
    • The protestation of a lot of laborer and intellectual like Einstein and Thomas Mann didn't change anything to the Authorithy decision.
    • After the death of the Italian was borned a wave of protest in the world and a lot of people, again today, had thinking that they were killed because of them political view and no because of the murder whom they were accused.
    • Sacco and Vanzetti are still today considering like heroes, and are the face to the tolerance and the justice.

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    • During the period of the most intense repression against the bolschevism had commyed the United States a lot of injustice against this people.
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    • During the period of the most intense repression against the bglobal tensions between the US and Bolschevism had commyed the United States a lot of injustice against this people.t's, the US persecuted anyone suspected of a connection to communism.
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    • Nicola Sacco and Bartolomeo Vanzetti were anarchist and because of that hab thought the government that they were implicated in a murder.
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    • Nicola Sacco and Bartolomeo Vanzetti were anarchists and because of that hab thoughtis, the government thought that they were implicated in a murder.
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    • The two men didn't hav criminal record, and the Authority had alsmot no proof to show that they were guilty.
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    • The two men didn't have criminal record, and the Authority had alsmost no proof to show that they were guilty.
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    • But that didn't impede the government to decided that they were liable of the murder, and to condenn the Italians to the death sentence.
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    • But that didn't impede the government to decidedbelieve that they were liable ofor the murder, and to condenmn the Italians to the death sentence.
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    • But after 7 years of jail were sacco ans Vanzetti executed in the electric chair, the 23 August 1927.
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    • But after 7 years of jail were s, Sacco ansd Vanzetti were executed in the electric chair, the on 23 August 1927.
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    • The protestation of a lot of laborer and intellectual like Einstein and Thomas Mann didn't change anything to the Authorithy decision.
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    • The protestation ofrom a lot of laborers and intellectuals, like from Einstein and Thomas Mann, didn't change anything tofor the Aauthorithy's decision.
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    • After the death of the Italian was borned a wave of protest in the world and a lot of people, again today, had thinking that they were killed because of them political view and no because of the murder whom they were accused.
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    • After the death of the Italian was, there borned a wave of protest in the world, and a lot of people, again today, had thinking thaought they were killed because of themir political view and not because of the murder whom they were accused.
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    • Sacco and Vanzetti are still today considering like heroes, and are the face to the tolerance and the justice.
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    • Sacco and Vanzetti are still today consideringed like heroes today, and are the face to the tolerance and the justice.
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