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Mini Essay: A Perfect Society

• It is believed some people always dream of an ideal society.

• However, it is not perfect yet, and criteria were not established.

• I am going to discuss basic elements of the society and ways how we can apply them.

• First of all the most important thing of the society is one common language for everyone in the Earth.

• In my opinion, people should come to perfect life in the world with chose one second language which helps them to communicate easier and easy to learn.

• So, I think it can be English because it is supposed the most popular the second language in the world and easier to learn than other.

• The second important item of a new type of society is the same laws around the world.

• Everyone has to obey the laws, and if these the same for each person in the world, it is much easier to understand and followed them.

• I think, the governments of the Earth should establish the same laws in each country and strictly followed them.

• For example, it can be China's laws because it has the most populated country on the Earth and has a powerful economic system.

• In conclusion, I believe that someday people will understand easier one another and followed the same laws for each member of an ideal society, but without the help of the governments of the world it cannot happen.