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Please Correct Me. Thank you in advance
- I just wanted you to see what my script looks like=) Everyone says it's terrible but it is only when I'm hurrying though=)

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- I just wanted you to see what my script looks like=) Everyone says it's terrible but it is only when I'm hurrying though=)
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- I just wanted you to see what my script looks like. =) Everyone says it's terrible ~~but~~, though it is only when I'm hurrying ~~though~~=)
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