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  • Good Nature

    • All wise people endeavour to achieve perfection and in this way they all try to have an attractive formidable personality, a noble high aim requiring lots of attributes among which good nature shines brightly.
    • Kindly treating people with a friendly smiling face, invites this lovely bird of felicity to land on our shoulder, and just frown at it to make it fly away(, and then the ugly boring bird of loneliness finds you.) Saying so, it is obvious that good nature brings much more than just impacting on benefits one gains from society, for it also relieves and gladden the heart merrily singing for a peaceful happy life to come.
    • Besides, good nature doesn’t nest in anyone but those having strong roots of true humanity, philanthropy and forbearance and because of this, hearing the lovely song of it anywhere signs the presence all these great virtues.
    • God the exalted embraces all virtues and those who have them which means having virtues close us to God as if he embraces us and in other words, perfection and eternal bliss come with virtues.
    • It is fair enough to conclude from all we said that good nature is the junction of different virtues, criterion for judging personalities and a key milestone one the road towards honour, glory and charisma.
    • All saints admired good nature and effusively praised those embellished with it and inspirited people by all appropriate means.

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    • All wise people endeavour to achieve perfection and in this way they all try to have an attractive formidable personality, a noble high aim requiring lots of attributes among which good nature shines brightly.
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    • All wise people endeavour to achieve perfection, and in this way they all try to have an attractive, formidable personality, a noble high aim requiring lots of attributes among which good nature shines brightly.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Kindly treating people with a friendly smiling face, invites this lovely bird of felicity to land on our shoulder, and just frown at it to make it fly away(, and then the ugly boring bird of loneliness finds you.) Saying so, it is obvious that good nature brings much more than just impacting on benefits one gains from society, for it also relieves and gladden the heart merrily singing for a peaceful happy life to come.
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    • Kindly treating people with a friendly, smiling face, invites this lovely bird of felicity to land on our shoulder, and just frown at it to make it fly away(, and then the ugly boring bird of loneliness finds you.) Saying so, it is obvious that good nature brings much more than just impacting on benefits one gains from society, for it also relieves and gladdens the heart merrily, singing for a peaceful, happy life to come.
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  • Sentence 3
    • Besides, good nature doesn’t nest in anyone but those having strong roots of true humanity, philanthropy and forbearance and because of this, hearing the lovely song of it anywhere signs the presence all these great virtues.
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    • Besides, good nature doesn’t nest in anyone but those having strong roots of true humanity, philanthropy and forbearance, and because of this, hearing the lovely song of it anywhere signs the presence all these great virtues.
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  • Sentence 4
    • God the exalted embraces all virtues and those who have them which means having virtues close us to God as if he embraces us and in other words, perfection and eternal bliss come with virtues.
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    • God the exalted, embraces all virtues and those who have them, which means having virtues close us to God, as if hHe embraces us and in other words, perfection and eternal bliss come with virtues.
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  • Sentence 5
    • It is fair enough to conclude from all we said that good nature is the junction of different virtues, criterion for judging personalities and a key milestone one the road towards honour, glory and charisma.
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    • It is fair enough to conclude from all we said that good nature is the junction of different virtues, criterion for judging personalities and a key milestone one the road towards honour, glory and charisma.
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  • Sentence 6
    • All saints admired good nature and effusively praised those embellished with it and inspirited people by all appropriate means.
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    • All saints had admired good nature and effusively praised those embellished with it, and inspirited people by all appropriate means. ¶
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