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  • death penalty debate

    • In Advantage is that murderers deserve the death penalty.
    • For example, if a man kills someone, he should be killed too, it would be normal.
    • We can not forgive the unforgivable.
    • An advantage to the death penalty is that the punishment is so horrible, and people are so afraid to die, that the crime rate falls.
    • It also makes sense, as murder is an unforgiveable crime and those who murder should be killed too.
    • It's a solution against crime.
    • In drawback, this sentence is horrible and excessive.
  • Spending life in prison is a punishment that lasts too long for criminals, who change quickly and are able to understand their mistakes.
    • "eye for eye and tooth for tooth" according to the Tallion, however this is not justifiable enough for the death penalty because criminals can change and become good men; it happens all the time.
  • Criminals can adapt back to regular life, even if they serve a lengthy sentence.
  • On top of this, the death penalty can be very unfair.
    • Two men could be sentenced to death for completely different offenses (for example robbery and murder), and the innocence of the defendant can often be misjudged.offense (for example the robbery and the murder).

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