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  • Addicted to something

    • It's not okay when you're addicted to something even if that thing is good and useful.
    • I used to be addicted to Twitter, I spent the last 2 years tweeting about every single thing happens in my life, I stopped reading, Stopped chatting with my friends"the real ones", I even stopped gathering with my family!
    • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has nothing to do but tweeting for getting more RTs ,more followers and more stars.
    • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in discovering my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need but it also harmed me, but you can put the blame on me as I am the one who gave it all my time and I am the one who turned to be addicted to it.
    • That's why I am asking you all not to be addicted to anything, try your best to keep balance and don't give anything more than it deserves.
  • Have a nice day :))

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    • I used to be addicted to Twitter, I spent the last 2 years tweeting about every single thing happens in my life, I stopped reading, Stopped chatting with my friends"the real ones", I even stopped gathering with my family!
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    • I used to be addicted to Twitter,. I spent the last 2two years tweeting about every single thing that happensed in my life,. I stopped reading, S and stopped chatting with my friends"¶(the real ones",). I even stopped gathering with my family!
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    • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has nothing to do but tweeting for getting more RTs ,more followers and more stars.
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    • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has, doing nothing to do but tweeting forto getting more RTs , more followers and more stars.
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    • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in discovering my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need but it also harmed me, but you can put the blame on me as I am the one who gave it all my time and I am the one who turned to be addicted to it.
      Vote now!
    • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in the discoveringy of my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need, but it also harmed me, but y. You can put the blame on me, as I amwas the one who gave it all my time and I amwas the one who turned to bbecame addicted to it.
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    • That's why I am asking you all not to be addicted to anything, try your best to keep balance and don't give anything more than it deserves.
      Vote now!
    • That's why I am asking you all not to become addicted to anything, t. Try your best to keep a balance and don't give anything more attention than it deserves.
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