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- Hello my dears!
- I want to find new friends and improve my english)

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- Hello my dears!
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- Hello my ~~dear~~friends!
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- Hello my ~~dears!~~friends!¶or¶Hello
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- I want to find new friends and improve my english)
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- I want to find new friends and improve my eEnglish).
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- I want to ~~find~~make new friends and improve my eEnglish).
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